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PostSubject: Gunslinger- Rated: R- Slash, strong language and violence   Mon Mar 10, 2008 8:50 am

Title:
Gunslinger
Summary: There is a gang war raging, the police
have lost control of everything and no one knows what to do.
P.O.V: 3rd person
Listening to: Avenged Sevenfold- City of Evil
Pairing(s): The Rev X Zacky Vengeance, maybe Frank
X Mikey but I’m concentrating mainly on A7X in this so that will be mentioned
rather than a main pairing
Disclaimer: Whatever...do I care...
Dedications: Erm…
Warning: Strong violence and language. Slash

The street war between two rival gangs had been going on for
at least 18 months, first it started off as a couple of members of these
particular gangs beating a few unknown suspects up, then it escalated to a full
blown war between two particular gangs.

No one knew what the gangs were called all the people knew
was that one gang went by the name A7X, and you could always tell they had
attacked people because of the way one of the members left his victims.

The Rev was a very practical killer, he was the psychotic
murderer of the gang, usually going around and beating people senseless for no
reason. He often killed his female victims, gauging their eyes out with a knife
and then putting them in a glass jar, and keeping them as some sick, twisted
souvenir.

He had recently returned to his gangs hide away, after going
on a spree and murdering 3 women, gauging out their eyes, so he knew he’d
definitely disposed of them. As he walked into the house, his once crisp white
shirt was stained a deep red from the blood spilled from his victims, he saw
the rest of A7X sitting on the sofa based in the corner of the room.

He stood in the doorway watching the rest of the members,
before finally entering the room. He walked straight past them and entered a
small room at the back of the room, it was extremely well hidden a lot of the
time people usually forgot about it, which The Rev was pleased about because
his sick, twisted mind worked best when he was in here.

Suddenly the door opened and one of his fellow members
walked in, closing the door carefully behind him, so as not to disturb The Rev.

“What is it Zacky?” The Rev asked, without even turning
around, he was too busy sorting out the three pairs of eyes he’d retrieved
earlier that day.

“Nothing…I just wanted to say hi…” Zacky responded
nervously, he knew The Rev would never hit him, but he also knew he had an
extremely short temper and he didn’t want to test the patience of The Rev.

“Well if that’s all, you can fuck off now” The Rev
responded, now writing out the description of the girl he had taken the eyes
from, and sticking it on the front of the jar.

“But…Rev?” Zacky protested, he heard The Rev sigh, and
watched anxiously as he turned around. The Rev stood looking firm at Zacky,
before walking forward and catching hold of his arm. He leant forward, kissing his
lips roughly; he forced Zacky backwards against the wall. Running his hands up
and down Zacky he pushed his tongue roughly into Zacky’s slightly opened mouth.

“Is that what you wanted?” The Rev asked after a few minutes
as he pulled away, breathing deeply.

Zacky couldn’t respond properly but merely nodded his head,
The Rev didn’t show affection very often but when he did, it often sent Zacky into mere mental fits because of it._______________________________________________________________

R&R pretty please...and I'll post more XD
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PostSubject: Re: Gunslinger- Rated: R- Slash, strong language and violence   Mon Mar 10, 2008 9:12 am

very good -applauds- but...i'm sure i have read it before

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PostSubject: Re: Gunslinger- Rated: R- Slash, strong language and violence   Fri May 16, 2008 1:26 pm

wow, that... is good =]
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PostSubject: Re: Gunslinger- Rated: R- Slash, strong language and violence   Sun May 25, 2008 2:39 pm

Thanks...I swear I will wirte the next chapter up at some point...myself and Li have been discussing extracts for this for a while...-mumbles and all I need to do is write the bloody things up...-sighs-
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PostSubject: Re: Gunslinger- Rated: R- Slash, strong language and violence   Thu May 29, 2008 4:45 pm

I can't remember where we were going with this one lol

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PostSubject: Re: Gunslinger- Rated: R- Slash, strong language and violence   Fri May 30, 2008 8:17 am

Neither can I..........oh, no wait I'll discuss it on msn or in college with you...don't wanna give anything away but wasn't 'he' behind it all and etc??

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PostSubject: Re: Gunslinger- Rated: R- Slash, strong language and violence   Fri May 30, 2008 8:58 am

ooooohhhhhh yes i think i remember now...isn't it when Zacky mistakenly does something that we think is funny??

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PostSubject: Re: Gunslinger- Rated: R- Slash, strong language and violence   Mon Jun 02, 2008 7:11 am

Yeap...and I've got another part as well XD
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PostSubject: Re: Gunslinger- Rated: R- Slash, strong language and violence   Sat Jul 12, 2008 3:57 pm

come on its good so continue please!
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